“I’m glad you like it, Azmat.”
“Beauty comes in all forms don’t you think?”
Fatty Women -> “Fatties” or “Fat Women”
I’m not fatty! -> I’m not a fatty!
Overweighted -> Overweight
It’s proofreadin’ time!
Just a little punctuation and stuff. How about this:
“I’m glad you liked *it [...] Beauty *comes in all[...]”
“Hmm…It’s probably [...] Alchemist Square; he paints *fat women.”
“I’m not *fat!”
“Er… hmm… alright. Correction: He’s into extremely *overweight women.”
Also, if those girls are extremely overweight, I guess you can call me a painter from Alchemist’s Square; they are HOT!
August 5th, 2010 at 11:35 pm
Oooh… shiny…
The extra highlighting is a nice touch. Makes it seem more like a painting.
August 6th, 2010 at 1:26 am
Beauty COMES in all forms don’t you think?
If the Alchemist Square is a shop that sentence works. Otherwise I think you meant:
It’s probably from that guy in the Alchemist’s square
August 6th, 2010 at 2:04 am
Ah the final
“I’m glad you like it, Azmat.”
“Beauty comes in all forms don’t you think?”
Fatty Women -> “Fatties” or “Fat Women”
I’m not fatty! -> I’m not a fatty!
Overweighted -> Overweight
August 6th, 2010 at 4:00 am
It’s proofreadin’ time!
Just a little punctuation and stuff. How about this:
“I’m glad you liked *it [...] Beauty *comes in all[...]”
“Hmm…It’s probably [...] Alchemist Square; he paints *fat women.”
“I’m not *fat!”
“Er… hmm… alright. Correction: He’s into extremely *overweight women.”
Also, if those girls are extremely overweight, I guess you can call me a painter from Alchemist’s Square; they are HOT!
August 7th, 2010 at 10:42 pm
ohhh she sat by a water fountain… I was wondering why she is even more huge than before!
August 10th, 2010 at 3:18 am
Oh, very nice and lovely work indeed. That’s quite the painting. Great work! Ha ha! =D
August 13th, 2010 at 1:16 am
I take it you are a red head and has a thin moustache, eh?
September 27th, 2010 at 5:33 pm
Aisha looks plush and round in this one. Just gorgeous and the lighting is fantastic too!